I didn't receive any feedback about changes, mostly just encouragement. People liked my passion for my idea, so I tried to let that shine through a little more. I kinda think these can be a little cheesy, so I held back a little bit last time. But this time I just completely embraced the cheesiness! Enjoy :)
The pitch: https://youtu.be/QyqU7ReB1sA
Hey Sarah, I know what you're talking about when you say you think it's kind of cheesy. I think it can just feel weird or uncomfortable when we are talking to a camera but trying to pretend we are talking to real people. I know I struggle with holding back and being realistic in this instance too. I really like your idea and your tone, though! Keep up the great work, I can see why you only got positive feedback.
ReplyDeleteSarah, I completely agree with you that it may be a little uncomfortable to talk to a camera but as Megan said, you have to pretend you are talking to real people so that you don feel weird. Resides that, I think you made a great pitch as excellent business idea. Great post.
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